Like i said on YT, track 3 is my favorite.
Now about the 30 minutes goal reduced to 13, don’t know why it turned out this way but i had a feeling you were in a hurry of chaining the tracks quickly.
I might be wrong but maybe you didn’t “dare” to take time to let transitions between tracks breathe. That’s a first go anyway, the skills are there, the tracks are good.
Maybe i’m sayin crap but i wouldn’t mind if you let the set take it’s time to happen.
I like the sounds. But I didn’t like the transition from 82 to 93. I think it’s always hard to change the tempo this drastically while still having some kind of feeling for tempo and rhythm in the music.
I think I would have muted the drums and increased the reverb to a big cloudy texture which doesn’t give the listener any tempo indication. And from that point on transition to new pattern.